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Friday, November 4, 2016

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             Teleportation Adventure

Josh and his friend Jake.They were bored they wonder if they can do something cool”. Jake ask josh’s dad if we can do anything for him. Jake said “can we help you?” Dad said “No thanks” Josh said “ok’ So we went to the candy store.It looks old Jake said”no one is here!’. Then we explore all around the candy store. And eat lots of lollies then we saw a light glowing Jake and Josh said “this is gonna be fun” Jake and Josh touched the glowing light the light turned into dark.Josh and Jake said “I wish we didn't do that” but it’s too late the dark glowing light is pulled.us And we went in a place.

Then we went exploring then they saw a sign Jake and Josh read it said “this is the lost island and there were lots of people” Jake said “wait if this is the lost island.why there are so many people?” we tried to find a way to go back on my home we need tons of materials.Josh said “I’m an expert at this” jake said “really?” we had to go to the shops but jake said “there is no shops because is a lost island” we ask a guy we ask him.Josh said “what is your name?”my name is drake.Jake said “can you speak english?” drake said  “ yes i can” josh said “is there shops in here?”drake said “yes there is. You can see a shop there” ” jake said”good” josh and jake walked to the shop.

Josh said “we are here”josh and jake went inside the store there is nobody is inside Jake said “josh take a look at this it looks really cool”Josh said “we need to think how to go back to our house Josh and jake tried to find the materials when Josh tried to find the materials Josh run pass a paper it’s “how make a portal” Jake and Josh got all the materials after 7 days.Josh said”It’s time the professional make the portal”Jake said can I help?” 2 day later from building the portal they were so excited Josh and jake went inside the portal.

Josh and jake went into a different place josh and jake was freaked out Jake said”Josh you are not a professional” josh said”o” josh and jake was in france josh and jake saw the portal Josh said”i’m still a professional at this”and Josh and jake went into the portal Josh said”oops i forgot there is a keyboard and we had to type our location where we want to go”jake said “you waste my time!”Jake was really angry.Josh type the location Austrailia.

1 day later they ended up in australia and they ended up in the candy store  Jake and josh was happy and go back to their house and josh said”did you realize that my dad is worried on us!”when we went to our house.josh dad was waiting for us in the gate then josh’s dad is so angry and then we went inside the house dad said “where have you been ? I waited for 8 days””Josh said”sorry”josh’s dad is so angry.Jake said”I need to go home!” Josh said”ok”next morning I helped dad. It was cool helping my dad.I helped him cooking!.

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